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Distant San Siro2010-03-29 10:10:10 +0000 #1
24 years of legend, the same feelings - cherish the memory of Paolo Maldini

Here is the San Siro, here is where you have a dream; here, you have shed a sweat, you have created in the pitch, one after another miracle; 24 years of bitterness and wind and rain, so that your name written into the annals of Italian football, 24 years of effort and hard work, so that fans around the world to know you your right that the loyalty of red and black, so that all the fans are all be moved, you have that red and black of passion, so that all the fans shouting for you; May 24, 2009, at San Siro stadium, in spite of the game in Rome Unfortunately, the defeat, but the outcome is no longer important, at this time, all from the San Siro stands of fans and fans around the world have to refocus on your body - the legendary San Siro No. 3, played at this time will ring away from the song, Since then, the San Siro will no longer have you on the pitch running figure, long 24 years, you use your feet and your loyalty, where a film has won applause, here writing for a while section of legend, this time you have a picture of each are present in people's minds linger on, people cry, people weep; it is you get the legendary red and black really shines, is that you get more people know here, the interpretation of what is called loyalty, what is legend; Today, although you are no longer running on the pitch, but the red and black legend will continue to be, your loyalty to the San Siro will continue, it will bring that spirit, passed on under a red and black of the 3, so that more stories written by you; you hear it? That is the applause from the San Siro fans ears, the cheer of San Siro will always be associated with you; now red and black shirt has faded, but the feelings are always the same red and black; your loyalty will be forever loaded into red and black history. We will always remember your in our hearts - Paolo Maldini. San Siro will always be your second home!


Xuan Yuan Cross2010-03-29 10:22:29 +0000 #2
am glad that I am a AC Milan fans. To watch him for ten years. I think that this feeling is still true if, and only some problems of diction. I can help you make the changes: Here is the San Siro, where is your dream place to start; here, you have witnessed the sweat, and you create the pitch of one miracle after another; 24 years of bitterness and wind and rain, put your The name written into the annals of Italian football, 24 years of effort and hard work, so that fans around the world are acquainted with you. You are right that the loyalty of red and black, so that all the fans and be moved; you that red and black of passion, so that all fans cry for you. May 24, 2009, at San Siro stadium, although regretted the Roman game lost, but the outcome is no longer important. At this point, fans from around the world all eyes are focused on to your body - the legendary San Siro 3. At this point, the songs of parting should rings Since then, the San Siro will not have you running presence. A long 24 years, you use your feet and your loyalty, where a film has won applause, where the next section after section of writing legend. At this point, you have a picture of an emerging in our mind, is a reminder, people cry; it is you get the legendary red and black really shines, is that you let more people know here is your interpretation of what is called loyalty, what is your legend; Today, though you are no longer running on the pitch, but the red and black legend will continue to be, your loyalty to the San Siro will continue. Will bring that spirit, passed under a red and black of the 3, so that more stories written by you. Did you hear it? The applause from the San Siro fans are ears, the cheer of San Siro will always be associated with you; now red and black shirt has faded, but the red and black feelings have never never far away from; your loyalty, will always be The loading history of San Siro. We will always remember your in our hearts - Paolo Maldini. San Siro, your forever home! This is my personal view, for reference only. I have a few suggestions: You should pay attention to punctuation, writing articles, there are not to use too many "a" word.

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